Many years ago, before I had any knowledge at all about Sufi mysticism, I submitted a poem I had written to a website which displayed submissions of others. The person who acted as the webmaster wrote back to me, explaining that he was happy to post my wonderfully Sufi-like poem.
I find it impossible, when something I have done is compared to some other thing I know nothing about, to avoid immediately seeking that other thing out so I can come to understand the similarities.
So, I gradually became more familiar with the writings of the great Sufi mystics, and I did see that there were similarities.
Here is a recent example. It's very short and simple, a piece I wrote specifically intending a Sufist-like energy.
Never Gone
It has been so long since I have seen you.
Too long. Far too long.
It has been a deepening absence,
This time that you've been gone.
Do you feel it, too?
Do you feel a hole inside your heart
Where my spirit once resided,
The perfect match for the hole now in mine?
Then, I felt a tingle
That little, subtle up-the-spine tingle
And I knew for certain
That you were never gone.
This piece was inspired by a poem by m. Claire entitled, "The Longing". (http://www.mclairepoet.com/home.html)
m. Claire is not a Sufi as far as I know. I'm not either, but I have come to admire the Sufi expression to the divine of what one feels as if the divine is a lover, either present or long-lost, or just yearned for during a day of separation. In fact, my first Sufi love poem to which I refer at the beginning of this post was written, as far as I knew, to an as-yet-undiscovered, imagined woman.
It is a more-intimate means of expression because it comes from a place of love and desire, not a place of worship. At the same time, it is, to me, a more pure expression of love than any worshipful words I have seen. Don't worry--I'm only expressing my own deep feelings on this subject, not seeking to convert anyone else to become a Sufi mystic!
On the other hand, reading a little Rumi never hurt anyone...
Sunday, June 29, 2008
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4 comments:
beautiful!
welcome among the sufis. :)
Thanks so much, mysticsaint!
I'll be visiting your blog to learn more.
I have a couple of Rumi books and a friend gave me a Rumi calendar for Christmas last year. Reading Rumi always, always affects me and can shift a mental attitude like quicksilver. Hmmm, now where are those books? :)
Angela--I actually have a Rumi collection on my desk at work, and when my glance falls on the book, I will pick it up and open it to a random page. It serves as a great two-minute break from whatever is going on at the time.
The other book in my mental-break pile is Wayne Dyer's book,
Change Your Thoughts - Change Your Life: Living the Wisdom of the Tao. Same deal--I just pick it up and let it tell me what page to read in that moment.
Good to see you out and about, visiting your cyber-neighbors, Angela!
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